Poetry: Magnet
There’s a flame of passion that’s growing deep within my gentle heart
As the ice melts away, I want to show you who I truly am
But without your help, the ice will never truly completely melt
So please I ask only this, will you hold my hand?
All I want is to only be with you
Our flame can only continue to grow
That, which was frozen is now a burning flame
Now our hands are free to join as one
So give your heart to me, so that I can keep it safe
And I promise to you that, I will never let it break
You can trust in me, because my heart is only for you
So now let me tell you this right now, I’m deeply in love with you
Everyday I’m without you, I just don’t know if I can make it through
But this burning passion in my heart, promises me that I shall
So I await your next appearance, so I can show my love to you
Until that time arrives, this flame shan’t be extinguished
I want to feel you standing, always, next to me
Because there’s nothing better than knowing…
That I am not alone, because I have you
So please, I ask, stay always by my side
So please never leave my side, You are truly my only drug
I want to be with you Promise me that we will always be
Place your hand on mine, Promise me you won’t let go
So now I’ll tell you once again, I’ll never stop loving you
I don’t know what I would do with out you now
I can’t even bear the thought of it
So let us not stop to think about what isn’t
Because time is such a precious thing
So give your heart to me, so that I can keep it safe
And I promise to you that, I will never let it break
You can trust in me, because my heart is only for you
So now let me tell you this right now, I want to love you
Keep me close to you, just like a Magnet would do
I need to feel you there, right beside me, I want you here
I don’t know what else could be more sweeter than this
I want to tell you now and forevermore, I’m deeply in Love with You
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Inspired by and written to fit a song by the same name(Sung by vocaloid actually).
So pretty much my own version of it. I guess. Hope you liked it.
Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gbez1jbzLL4
How could anyone resist such an unwavering declaration of complete love? Wonderfully expressed!
August 2, 2011 at 9:41 am
Thank you for your time and thoughts. ^^
August 2, 2011 at 3:49 pm
its wonderful! who wouldn’t like this?
August 2, 2011 at 12:20 pm
Thank You ^^ I’m glad you liked it.
August 2, 2011 at 3:59 pm
Passionate love poem with powerful imagery. Great stuff.
Here is my post:
http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/09/rose.html
September 12, 2011 at 5:29 pm
Thank you for reading, and thank You for commenting. ^^
I’ll be reading yours shortly.
September 13, 2011 at 12:37 pm
yoku dekita
(it’s been a while since I spoke japanese.. forgive me if it wasn’t correct)
glad to see you at the potluck :)
hope you check out my page
September 13, 2011 at 3:22 pm
Thank You, and of course I’ll check out your page. ^^
September 15, 2011 at 11:37 am
such a wonderfully written love poem with so much love in your heart on this one
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/27/the-island-breeze/
September 13, 2011 at 3:44 pm
Ah yes… Thank You.
September 15, 2011 at 11:37 am